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conclusion of losing her reality...
Contributed by
little_genna
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:52:10 AM in AEST
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Part 4
Anxiety she will get hurt,
Now a Christian convert.
She has a new faith,
But still lack the vital faith.
The belief she needs,
Watching old scenes as her arm bleeds.
This is what her anxiety used to lead to,
It was a very disturbed view.
Part 5
Underneath she is lonely,
She used to be bitter and angry.
She learned to open a little
Still she is very fragile.
Trust in others is hard,
As she is already so scarred.
She is me, I am the scared child.
Celia I still see your face when you smiled.
Since your death I became this stranger.
It is the reason I held this anger,
Towards no one but
Myself.
(It was easier to refer to me as her.
It felt less personal….Also as a little information Celia was like my second mum and she died when i was 12 and now im nearly 17)
SJ
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Re: conclusion of losing her reality...
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by Mangs on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:26:00 AM AEST
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Look not mournfully into the past. It comes not back again. Wisely improve the present. It is thine. Go forth to meet the shadowy future, without fear.
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Re: conclusion of losing her reality...
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 01:39:55 PM AEST
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beautiful poem genna, here's wishing u a gentle recovery, u write beautifull . . .
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Re: conclusion of losing her reality...
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by wolfman on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:41:54 PM AEST
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all things with time will work them selves out, yes it is difficult but is an inevitable part of growing up, I see that she has relized that she is who she is not what she thinks she is. yes it is hard to dedicat your life to the Lord but al the god that will come from it makes it worth it.
when you finaly open up to people that is when you are the most vulnerable, but dont give up be strong and you wil pull through and that will make you all the more happy, yes when you loss someone that is close to you the pain will never fully leave but the joy and the memories are still there so take heart in them they will help you through as well.
I am glad to see that you were able to finish this series of poems (sorry though for taking so long to get to this one) I am happy in knowing that she turnd out alright and I wish her all the best and I will pray for her. I would still like to see mor of this, mabey put them all togeather and add a little more to fill in the gaps, but still this came out great, please do post again soon, tell then be strong and God bless.
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