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Last goodbye
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:01:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm falling faster than I can beat my wings
I'm going down so fast, I've lost sight of my dreams
I'm going to hit the ground before I can say goodbye
I know I can't get up off the floor, I'm going to die
Throughout all the years
For every smile, there were a thousand tears
My heart is still beating, it's black and blue
I kept on going through all this just for you
Did you know you were my reason not to die?
You were my wings, you helped me fly
Now you lie beneath the ground
I'm going to die without you, never to be found
Out hearts were entwined
Although we were dying in our minds
I don't know when I'll see you again
Maybe then my heart will mend
This is my last goodbye
Now I've come to join you in celestial skies
Copyright ©
blueeyedevil13
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2005-01-19 06:01:27]
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Re: Last goodbye
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:37:50 AM AEST
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good write and dont worry ull see him again hopefully not anytime soon g2g bye
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Re: Last goodbye
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by cheech on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:59:48 AM AEST
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aww,i'm sorry about ur loss,but dont commit suicide,yeah sure we know u must have loved this paul,but if we all committed suicide bc someone we loved died,this whole world would be people less,there would be no one,please dont commit suicide and please dont be offended by what i've got to say,its only me no more important then u,her,them,him,i'm no one specail.although it would be nice if u could just take my advice.Life is hard enough for those who miss someone who died no one should be saddened over 2 deaths,1 accidental or whatever and a suicide.beautiful write though,keep'em comen awesome,love ya, muah
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Re: Last goodbye
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 11:38:06 AM AEST
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i agree, if everyone took their own life b/c they missed someone else, this world would be that much short of some very awesome people. however, i know how you feel, my friend committed suicide two years ago. you'll get through it, keep your chin up, and always remember them in your heart. make them proud while you're still here so that when you meet again in heaven you'll have more to talk about.....
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