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DON''T LAUGH AT ME!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Please don't laugh at me,
or snicker behind my back,
you think I cant hear or see,
well I can thats a fact,
I have feelings just as you do,
so please don't laugh at me,
I might not look like you,
so just let me be,
You might say I'm a geek,
or even ugly too,
behind my back you sneek,
but I can still hear you,
please don't laugh at me,
for it hurts inside,
I dont have friends you see,
I even have tried,
I wish you could see me as a person,instead of a freak,
if you'd only get to know me,
You'd see I'm not such a geek,
instead you wish to hurt me,
and laugh at me to my face,
the hurt you cant feel,only see,
a pain not easy to erase!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
... [
2002-12-06 07:00:00]
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Re: DON''T LAUGH AT ME!
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by Nessiecat on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 08:18:54 AM AEST
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Great poem!
Sometimes I think we'd all be better off if we were invisible. |
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Re: DON''T LAUGH AT ME!
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by Foo on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 08:35:52 AM AEST
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| Hey i really liked this one.Good write! |
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Re: DON''T LAUGH AT ME!
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by Jessica_Saini on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 01:19:11 PM AEST
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Society can be so brutal.
This was a good write. |
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Re: DON''T LAUGH AT ME!
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 01:51:47 PM AEST
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| this brings back some painful memories for me.... good write though.... I wish more people would take this to heart.... |
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Re: DON''T LAUGH AT ME!
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by Sarah22 on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 10:58:08 PM AEST
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dont give up
on any of your
dreams and goals
in the future . |
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Re: DON''T LAUGH AT ME!
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by OreO on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 10:15:10 PM AEST
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Christina this is such a sad beautifully written piece, and it's sad that people get treated this way, it lowers there self esteem in life and makes them beleive they are ugly and unworthy of being around people...thanks for sharing this one it makes one think of alot of things...and i agree with nessiecat sometimes i think the world would be better if we were all invisible...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: DON''T LAUGH AT ME!
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by Roshie on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:37:31 AM AEST
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| A beautiful yet sad life, people can be harsh, it just takes awhile for people to understand the true damage that they do, unfortunately not everyone can see the pain they deal out to others. A trully great write keep them comming I enjoy your poetry! :) |
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