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Sanctuary
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:57:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I love the way the pain feels
And the way that the blood falls
It’s my way of blocking the world
I’ve built my own fictitious walls
Pieced together with the scars
And sealed with the crimson red
That is where I feel safe
Deep inside my own head
For every drop of blood
There is a secret of a time I fell
And for every scar I have
There is a story for me to tell
Every secret and every story
Is filled with all the pain inside
But that is where they’re better off
Because they give me a place to hide
A sanctuary of my very own
Left alone where I can be free
I can think whatever thoughts I please
And there’s no one to say how it “should” be
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2005-01-18 22:57:46]
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Re: Sanctuary
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 11:08:36 PM AEST
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I loved every line, Its how I feel and am at most times. Very very Powerful, It kinda reminds me of my Forever Alone but from the other side of things
Sorry for rambleing
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Re: Sanctuary
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 11:35:25 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I loved it. Nice work. |
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Re: Sanctuary
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:42:13 AM AEST
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hey i know dark poetry and this is a good one u have ur mind as sanctuary thats good wish i could go tomy mind for that. well good write and bye bye
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Re: Sanctuary
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:31:51 PM AEST
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| Very good write..I really felt alot of what was expressed here..Good job. |
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