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Dream of Darkness
Contributed by
blueyes11
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:12:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Where the twilight sky merges
with an amethyst ocean,
and the sweet breeze sweeps
golden sand into mountains,
I soar, skimming water
spilling lines of horizon,
racing stars in the dark,
before diving below.
Where the shadowy caverns
are suddenly brightened
and cool water sways
to the beat of the heart,
I float here so blithely
all worries, a memory
all calmness surounds
till my dream slips away.
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blueyes11
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2005-01-18 22:12:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dream of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kuro_Mirai on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:46:01 PM AEST (User
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Wow, thats a nice poem. You explained the surrounding so perfectly. Great job, I really enjoyed this. |
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Re: Dream of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:31:09 PM AEST (User
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this is beautiful... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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