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Bromidic Lovely
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:59:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Picture yourself, silent
one of wonder,
Your pasty skin
is so generic,
your naked body,
with its hardened nipples
and its curly hairs peeking
does not arouse me at all.
you with your pallid, sallow skin
as spread cream cheese or yogurt,
there is no taste of cherry
you contain no banana,
your eyes would shimmer silver and blue,
if only I would pay attention.
Within your skin your jaw
creaks when it moves
the sound is repulsive as
your tongue flops and flaps
all about as does that of a dog,
very excited, very sweaty, who is very
happy to see me
even though I continue to ignore it.
I occasionally hear you above the shooting,
I frequently feel you below my belt,
and I am very happy your head
does not block the television.
When you are crying I am laughing;
it is so very ticklish too watch your face
ooze, contort, and discharge.
Your makeup is running,
and you do not appear to be catching it.
My left ear has overheard
you exclaim squirtingly to your chums
of the crunchingly lovely love letters
you email me.
On another topic,
I thank God daily for my
Block Senders List.
And now I am bored,
so I would appreciate it if you would remove yourself
from atop of me,
I shall provide you with the location
of a street corner on which you may spend the day
and a dumpster in which you may spend the night.
Please drop by tomorrow, however,
for I will be purchasing a new pair of steel-toed boots.
I love you.
Great, sure,
don't forget to make me some dinner before you leave.
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SensitiveSoAbused
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Re: Bromidic Lovely
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:18:33 PM AEST
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Encyrpted images that seem to bulge, trying to break free of the bonds that keep them in the shadows. Thought provoking write!
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Re: Bromidic Lovely
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 07:32:48 PM AEST
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A very possessive part of you that reveals itself in a beautiful fashion... Your utter dislike for her, this Anonymous girl, sounding so much like a whore, as you dehumanize her with your words, your dagger words, tearing at the hideous image of HER, with her flacid breasts, and unappealing body, her oozing makeup (Maybeline or Revlon?) joining with the shameful tears that ejaculate from her unheeded eyes... My god, man... You never stop evoking all of these paintings... these other-worldly masterpieces inside my head, and I am once again inspired. Divine till the very last period. Hidden messages, and fresh images in every line; simply flawless. I cannever emphasize enough just HOW much I adore your work... There is nothing to be disappointed at, your ways of expression is always raw and tres frais! La creme de la creme of all surrealistic writes! I enjoyed this thoroughly, and love every side of you that you feel comfortable in exposing... An unrequited love that is heeded with cold blue eyes of indifference... LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it! Okie dokie, I think I'm done yakking your ear off, :P. T'was a great pleasure reading and commenting, my dear. Please... do write again. All my love. Forever,
Your dear friend/little flower,
~*Stephy*~ |
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