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Cut Yourself

Contributed by essentially9 on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:27:35 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Cut Yourself

You tell me while you cry
All the reasons why
You want to die

They aren't good enough
The strife can be reached above
And you don't need any love

You only listen to yourself
And drown in the emotions felt
Down so far that you never hear me
And you're still blind to everything
Unable to breathe

Cut yourself, slice the vein
Kill yourself, hate the pain
Don't think about anything
Just give up everything
And cut the pain away

Forget why
You were given a life
Forget why
I even tried




Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-01-18 21:27:35]
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Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:39:17 PM AEST
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Great write I loved the first stanza,very powerful.


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by visualizing_life on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:04:27 PM AEST
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i really like it...reminds me of myself....nice expression...keep writing i want to read more or your work...


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:05:08 PM AEST
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It's a trial of patience, when trying to help one who is depressed. Whether it be yourself or a loved one. Well expressed.

peace
TS


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by Whitelightning77 on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:10:52 PM AEST
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Very powerful. The sturggle to reach someone in that state of mind takes many forms of strength.

thanks for sharing!


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:12:13 PM AEST
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powerful indeed...i especially enjoyed the first stanza too (as already mentioned) i think it really sets the tone for this poem...good job =)


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:45:43 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. Awesome poem.

Spazzo


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 12:12:53 AM AEST
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Very good write.....I can feel your frustration with trying to save this person who won't save their self.....Sometimes taking a step back from the situation does some good - Remember they have to want help as much as you want to help them.....
Thanks for sharing!
juliette


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:47:53 AM AEST
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very powerful, an enthralling read x


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:19:26 AM AEST
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Jennifer you really are one of the few here that has talent worth a damn.


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by Brebabe33 on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:18:15 PM AEST
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Also a good write! I think that it has potentional and even though it is not one of my favorite subjects i like how u wrote it!! nicely done


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:03:12 PM AEST
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Violent yet suttle to me..Course I am into horrible blood driven lines..This wets my appetite..Strong write


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:40:51 PM AEST
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This is amazing and very very true. I've felt like that and I've done that. Tried to tune out the people that cared, that tore down my reasons. I told my self they didn't get it and carried on my dreary way. This hits so very close to home. I love it. -Sami-


Re: Cut Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by jono on Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 10:17:49 AM AEST
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I feel like that all the time




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