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i love....
Contributed by
visualizing_life
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:07:21 PM in AEST
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i love your eyes
i always fall into them
i love your smile
you always know when
i love your laugh
so warm and free
i love the way you look at me
like i matter
i love the way you hug me
like you never want to let me go
i love the way your hand always finds mine
like you always want to touch me
i love the way you kiss
like you want to kiss me always
i love the way you try and impress me
even though you already have my heart
i love everything about you
in everyway possible
but i dont love you
i wont let myself
fall for you anymore
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Re: i love....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:10:33 PM AEST
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| Sweet poem. I really enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: i love....
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by Opinionator on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:20:53 PM AEST
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| you asked for comments and therefore I am prepared to be honest. What are you trying to say? I really could not think that it took you more than maybe seven minutes to write this. If you are so head over heals for this person the last line is incongerous. Sorry, try again. |
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Re: i love....
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by Stalkee on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:22:31 PM AEST
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| wow, I really liked this...I like how it was structured...totally lead me in the direction that in the end it was gonna be like a big "I LOVE YOU!" but no, not all...great job, it was a joy to read =) |
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Re: i love....
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:54:15 PM AEST
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Nice. But the end doesn't make sence when you said that you love this person then at the end say that you don't.
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Re: i love....
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by CurtisC on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 01:35:05 AM AEST
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it was alright until I got to the end then it all didnt make sense anymore. I like it though inspite of the odd ending..
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Re: i love....
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by tractorbabe on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:24:35 PM AEST
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i like it..its to the point ....and a good twist at the end that u know aint true ..great poem though
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