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Can’t get you off my mind . .
Contributed by
Marisa_A_sydney
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:48:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can’t get you off my mind
I think about you all the time
Why.. What did you do to me?
And you can’t even know how I feel..
I miss you so much that sometimes I cry myself to sleep
I never thought for you, my feelings would run so deep
Though I shouldn’t want to.. I long till I next see you
You echo in my thoughts, in everything I do..
Wondering why things had to end up this way
That’s something that I do every day
I try to forget you, really.. I try
Though it seems impossible till the day I die..
How you feel about me, I guess I’ll never know
And my feelings for you.. I’ll try my best not to show
I really wish sometimes that things between us were different
Given a chance together.. we could’ve been magnificent..
Take care of yourself please and be careful what you do
There’s nothing worse for me than to completely lose you
As it is right now you’re still alive and well
But a life without you in it, would be a living hell..
- Sunday 9th January 2005 -
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Re: Can’t get you off my mind . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:11:51 PM AEST (User
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Sigh...sure would love to see some happy poetry from you again.....
Love you..
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Re: Can’t get you off my mind . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stalkee on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:20:02 PM AEST (User
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this is how a lot of my poetry is (although not nearly as good!)...a lot of longing went into this and I know how it feels...I hope things will get better for...great poem by the way |
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Re: Can’t get you off my mind . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by CurtisC on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 01:54:24 AM AEST (User
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wonderful poem! I can relate to this like you wouldn't believe. Thanks for sharing this one :)
Curtis |
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Re: Can’t get you off my mind . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Evilcaf on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:02:39 AM AEST (User
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wonderful poem made me cry, know these feelings well. take care xxx |
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Re: Can’t get you off my mind . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by CoLD on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:09:44 PM AEST (User
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Awesome poem, it's the only one i found so far that I can relate to 100%. Good Job |
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