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Vile Addiction
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:43:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Death is
Relief.
Is that why,
You seek it?
So desperately?
So violently?
You take life
For granted,
Wasting it away
On drugs.
Vile addiction,
All for a high
Cheating death,
While secretly
Craving the end.
Is it worth it?
The high?
The damage?
Still,
You want life,
Filled with
Drugs.
I have bad news
You cant have both.
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blacksabbath026
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2005-01-18 20:43:26]
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Re: Vile Addiction
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:16:49 PM AEST
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| Good write. Powerful ending. |
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Re: Vile Addiction
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:28:34 PM AEST
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I want both and got it babe
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Re: Vile Addiction
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by bluebird on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 11:38:29 PM AEST
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i respect ur view point on this but have to disagree with the last lines aswell.
it is possible to have both.
and yes it is worth it,the high and the damage both of them,its worth it.cant explain it,but afterr you come off the high its like..life is dif,theres so many ways you can look at it.
other then that great write
~keepthefaith~
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