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Superman and The Yellow Sun
Contributed by
AJG
on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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Last night while
Asleep
I watched a movie in
Technicolor
Dad played the
Man of Steel, and Mom the Yellow Sun.
His diamond emblem sparkled in
Her radiating light
As he flew with
Grace and dignity over
The city below
Villans crumbled in his path
While MEtropolis
Flourished in the
Warm summer
Then, as if by an
EditingGlitch
Kryptonite metors and
Blinding supernovas
Rattled caMEra
One
Into submission
Credits
Rolled
Too
Fast
To
Comprehend
I still sleep with his cape under
My pillow and
Her warmth in my
Chest
Copyright ©
AJG
... [
2002-12-06 06:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Superman and The Yellow Sun
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by Nessiecat on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 08:20:05 AM AEST
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| That's sweet :) |
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Re: Superman and The Yellow Sun
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by OreO on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 10:10:57 PM AEST
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This is so cute...i enjoyed this alot...thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Superman and The Yellow Sun
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by Ooniegirl on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 12:39:41 AM AEST
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Adam,
This is a beautiful tribute to the idealizations of childhood - the perspective from which we viewed our intimate worlds seemed so romantic and simple when we were young. The startling ending to this epic feature induces a sense of fragmentation and numbness, and yet, a mood of reverence and inner peace is manifested in your words. I love this one.
J |
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Re: Superman and The Yellow Sun
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by colette on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 03:31:36 AM AEST
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| i love the sense of speed shutting down to a boy, now a man, curled up under the covers with one hand under the pillow, the other over his heart. dark, quiet, with a single light. great job, this is moving and sobering. c. |
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Re: Superman and The Yellow Sun
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by Sarah22 on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 10:57:38 PM AEST
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| great poem keep writing . |
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