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I love you
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:10:02 PM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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I finally spoke up
And this is how it ended up
Nothing more then before
But nothing less then a broken inner core
But thats okay
Becouse your better of this way
Maybe pushing the envolope that far is bad for us
Even though, I know this is love not lust
One sided love at least
I will love you till I rest in piece
Your one of the only that took the time to understand me
One of the few that does'nt turn around walk away and ignore me
Maybe it will change some day
For now this is the only way
You know how I feel about you
But like I said before, there is nothing more I can do
Just to let you know
I love you
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ForeverAlone
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:12:44 PM AEST (User
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Aw that's sweet. Nice write. Blessings. |
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:09:50 PM AEST (User
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awe .. does she not know you love her ? or are you both in love and just reminding her ? i am a little confused about that .. i really like this poem .. your love is expressed great and i hope that she knows !
Much love -
Xx luckie _ lynn xX |
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:15:37 PM AEST (User
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another amazing write. you have talent dripping from your lines. beware the less talented might try to lick it up. |
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