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Killing Me Slowly
Contributed by
killingmehslowly
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:09:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Slowly I'm dying
Inside I'm crying
Watching the world pass me by
Let out a hopeless sigh
Stuck in this nightmare
Enough to give anyone a scare
Barely know myself
Let alone anyone else
I have it pretty good
But I don't act like I should
Because slowly I'm dying
And inside I'm crying
No ones fault but my own
Try not to ***** and moan
Lost in my depression
People try to push their way in
Look at them apathetically
Rather than do what's expected of me
I am pathetic, I am lowly
And you're all just killing me slowly.
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2005-01-18 20:09:02]
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Re: Killing Me Slowly
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by Vampy on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:10:51 PM AEST
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| Wow, I was there before... things can always get better though. Nicely written :) |
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Re: Killing Me Slowly
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by Unheard_Mute on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:57:42 PM AEST
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| great poem, sad, but great... love it sami |
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Re: Killing Me Slowly
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:38:49 PM AEST
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| very well written, sami. you portrayed the concept with excellence. good thing you finally wrote it =] |
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