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At The Gate
Contributed by
imlostbutloved69
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:08:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I write these notes
That don't really exist
These marks
That show the hate
This blade hurts
It twists and bends
These pouring wounds
You're too late
These falling tears
Hurt inside and out
This pain
Is nothing but fate
These bleeding wounds
Took everything
Every single thing
And now I stand at The Gate
Copyright ©
imlostbutloved69
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2005-01-18 20:08:02]
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Re: At The Gate
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by Vampy on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:12:28 PM AEST
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| How sad :( |
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Re: At The Gate
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:56:25 PM AEST
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I hope things get better for you.
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Re: At The Gate
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by crazygirl on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:50:18 PM AEST
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im sorry if you feel this way, truly. the poem was really good though
-bailey rose- |
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Re: At The Gate
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by Supergurl1071 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:38:07 PM AEST
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| Really good. I like your metaphoric symbols a lot, especially the last line, very powerful. |
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