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A Blank Smile
Contributed by
vampy
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 07:56:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I sigh at the sight of you.
So many words to speak,
yet no way to express them.
Your empty promises surround me.
You are hopelessly sinking, drowning,
and I cannot save you.
I thought I could teach you
to swim through the strongest currents,
to climb the ladder of success.
I watch you drown, I watch you fall.
Saving you is not an option --
I have tried and failed.
I feel numb toward you.
What am I to do,
when I have no words for you?
You have left me numb.
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vampy
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2005-01-18 19:56:28]
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Re: A Blank Smile
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 07:57:51 PM AEST
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| Great poem, it feels terrible when you try and help a friend, but fail... |
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Re: A Blank Smile
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 11:01:37 PM AEST
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Great poem.
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