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Empty Thoughts
Contributed by
essentially9
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 07:09:41 PM in AEST
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Empty Thoughts
The glass of water
Is halfway empty
And halfway full
The glass of water
Is also all the way
Filled with fluids
And all the way
Filled with air
But either way
You still think of it
As halfway empty
Or halfway full
Because you close your mind
To only believe lies
And because you never think
Any of your own thoughts
Pertaining to life
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-18 19:09:41]
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Re: Empty Thoughts
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 07:19:00 PM AEST
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| I liked that, its ... I dont know ... its good though. |
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Re: Empty Thoughts
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by Kay-Kay on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 07:20:03 PM AEST
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hey good job on this poem...it really makes me think...keep up the good work
~Kay-Kay |
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Re: Empty Thoughts
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 07:29:40 PM AEST
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| I wrote one almost like this days ago but never posted it..Glad I didnt now..Yours was much better hun. |
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Re: Empty Thoughts
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by killingmehslowly on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:00:17 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem. Definately different and it makes me think about it. (ah, the pain. it hurts to think! j/k) But seriously this is good and I like it. -Sami- |
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Re: Empty Thoughts
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by Stalkee on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:32:39 PM AEST
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| I really like this, just somethin about it that struck me as really good! So cheers for that =), thanks for sharing this |
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Re: Empty Thoughts
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:34:33 PM AEST
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I am reminded of one of those little gifts bought on vacation. The one of the boat floating on the water. It's all full but different colours and perspective. Totally in how one perceives life.
peace
TS |
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Re: Empty Thoughts
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 01:03:44 AM AEST
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hmm interesting poem was this written while
stoned cuz it kinda sounded like it. To be
honest I thought it was alrite, but it definitely
wasn't your best.
Bobo (Joel) |
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