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To the thoughts of her
Contributed by
Urizen
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:49:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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An archangel came and stole you in my dreams,
wild hair, windsweept eyes, he never seems to grin,
away, away, too much I can't say,
You never seem to notice and really I'm not suprised,
Meance, towards, new unconquared skies,
touch my heart, evil soul, errupt within my sight,
'cos there's no use looking, holding, yearning,
all good has faded, love is a promise unmade,
tomorrow, we will all feel the same.
An open letter, an unopened book
pages stuck together
the walls around you fall.
We are all the same, hanging by a single thread,
nothing to say, I long for nothing less.
Peace be with you, everyone knows,
we belong to nothing, the scars of revolution show
brains heal, youth shows, single footsteps of blood,
raging thoughts curl, stranded, too tough.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2005-01-18 17:49:32]
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Re: To the thoughts of her
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:00:47 PM AEST
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| Good write. It's very interesting. |
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Re: To the thoughts of her
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:22:34 PM AEST
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| Seconding Marisa; it's intriguing. Was "unconquared" a mispelling or on purpose, I wonder, because it's interesting. Thoughtful. Blessings. |
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Re: To the thoughts of her
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 04:37:14 PM AEST
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There's some good stuff here, but after struggling so much with your spelling, I gave up. Take some time to edit next time...you have so much potential.
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Re: To the thoughts of her
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by MorbidDeath on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 05:06:54 PM AEST
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I hope to read more from you u have an amazing way with words,
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