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falling petals
Contributed by
darkestpetal
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 04:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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shrouds of darkness smother
details matter not
adorned in black
her feet slowly walk
petals softly falling
onto the frozen ground
tears left still standing
hiding tears from a crowd
deaths secrets kept
the ones left behind
why did he chose
a way out with suicide
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darkestpetal
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2005-01-18 16:16:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: falling petals
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 04:55:07 PM AEST (User
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Such a sad write, but it's very good.
I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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