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Surprises Just Walking

Contributed by Whisper on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 03:34:26 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Walking Slow,
head hanging low.
Watching the shadows
The air so still and quiet,
but for the gentle padding of your feet,
against ole MOther Earth.

My mind gets all alight
My heart seems so free
The freshness of it all
Makes me feel real .
I am not alone.
The air fills me.
The branches creep down
and cradles , caressing me

I let the sense of the Woodland carry me on.
Leading me, Guiding me
Just Taking me along.
My real self all gone as We all knew.
Only the wonders They show me
Only wood Life before me.
No crime, TV or Media crap
Just sensing and smells and
Wonders l"ve seen.

So freely given.
Eyes wide open .
Like the very first time.
What Peace I've found.
If only I could take us there.

Can one afford to share it around
To tell others
where it's found.
That quiet place, A simplier time.
I just wished a Wish
then suddenly
Swish
Finding it all a fairytale dream
The Joy of the woodland still engulfed me.

How sad I feel.
for it hadn't lasted long.
The Morning Sun's ray spills over .
Your senses return.
And Bring you back down.
But just in those moments this life
was there.

Regular Surprises
Always will be.
As long as I can dream
and So can you.

Peace

Whisper

Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2005-01-18 15:34:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Surprises Just Walking (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 04:48:26 PM AEST
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this is incredible nothing I would say at this moment would do it justice leaves me feeling so peaceful thanks for this
Michelle

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