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PAIN AND TURMOIL
Contributed by
scottishdancer
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 01:31:46 PM in AEST
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He gazed into the obscured abyss
With troubled eyes amiss
The firy depths of despair
Could not reach his wiry stare
He heard them wail
As his mouth went stale
He tried to cry
But could not reply
He weeped and moaned
And wished of home
As he loses his soul
To pain and turmoil
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2005-01-18 13:31:46]
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Re: PAIN AND TURMOIL
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 01:43:58 PM AEST
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| Ah i think this could mean somthing diffrent for every person who reads it. i like the rythem too it. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: PAIN AND TURMOIL
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by scottishdancer on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 01:48:16 PM AEST
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| I didn't write this intending to describe hell. When I wrote this I wanted to describe metaphorically how I was feelign inside, but I want everyone that reads it to use their life experiences to come up with their own interpretation of it because it can be interpretated in many different ways. |
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