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Go Away To Die in Pain
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 11:22:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I shouldn't be alive
I don't deserve to live
I mess up everything
And have nothing to give
You say that it isn't
But I know the truth
It's all my fault for hurting you
Don't tell me you love me
You hardly know me at all
So I'll crawl in a cave
Away from this world
And no one will hate me
No one at all
And the pain will keep building
Til it becomes time
For me to curl up and die
It wouldn't be suicide
Just a painful death
I will die in pain
Copyright ©
UnlovedChild
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2005-01-17 23:22:11]
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Re: Go Away To Die in Pain
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 02:20:06 AM AEST
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Amy this is such a sad powerfull poem, it really is such a treat to see you grow as a poet. I miss you too.
Hugs Always,
Jane x |
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Re: Go Away To Die in Pain
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by iluvpencils on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 10:28:32 PM AEST
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| Wow, powerful and sad. But great though. Keep writing you have talent =) |
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Re: Go Away To Die in Pain
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:16:19 PM AEST
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| you have talent and you have potential, you just need to let your talent fulfill your potential. |
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