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Sadistic Romance Part II
Contributed by
eternalnight4x
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:31:56 PM in AEST
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His chocolate eyes they burned with guilt
From all the blood that she had spilt
The blade he slit across her skin
For yet again he did give in
To the spirit possessing his body and mind
An escape from this soul he hoped only to find
But day after day it took control
The spirit with the sadistic soul
She clung to him for her own protection
Yet knowing this safety was but a deception
Then suddenly chills shot up her spine
A deep voice declared “You’re now mine”
Struggling to free herself from his clutch
She tried to avoid his brutal touch
“I always liked a challenge” he did say
So continued she did to break away
He seized her wrist and grasped it tight
And said “My dear it’s useless to fight
You belong to me, and I alone”
His voice had changed to an irritated tone
Fed up with her attempts, onto the bed she was thrust
And within his eyes burned bitter lust
He tore off her clothes and caressed her skin
"A feeble attempt" she did give in
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Re: Sadistic Romance Part II
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by blueyes11 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:56:07 PM AEST
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| wow, this one is really powerful! It definitely evokes some anger, frustration, and fear in me as i read it. Good job, keep writing. |
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Re: Sadistic Romance Part II
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:26:24 PM AEST
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Reminds me of afterdark for some reason. ;-)
A nice darkly sort of romantic write! |
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