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Meadows
Contributed by
skelington
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:29:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I pictured a place that is and always will be heaven
to the eyes ears nose and mouth.
But most of all my dying heart can soothe and regain its love and affection for all
but especially you
there's a special place knowing no end
to me myslef and whatever i become
this thing inside that ticks away
ticks slower with each comming day
but this place reminds me i am loved but not wanted here
eyes sulk with the burden of never-ending tears
i am loved but not wanted here
pain is only the beggining which binds us all together
the meadows somewhere will appear and everything will be all right
will be all right
i am loved but not wanted here
eyes sulk with the burden of never-ending tears
this place reminds me
it reminds me there's a special place knowing no end
to me myslef and whatever i become
this thing inside that ticks away
ticks away slower with each comming day
this place reminds i am loved but not wanted here
eyes sulk with the burden of never-ending tears
i am loved but not wanted here
you are not loved or wanted here
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Re: Meadows
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by blueyes11 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:59:48 PM AEST
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| Very interesting to read, i want to read it again and again. I liked the use of repetition. Good job. |
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Re: Meadows
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:21:37 PM AEST
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| i agree. the ran together writes are better than the scattered ones in my opinion. |
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