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Flicker
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Blinded, panicked, afraid to open my eyes,
My soul reaches for light as my heart cries,
I know the truth means safety, in darkness terror hides,
I have nothing left to give, nobody on either sides.
Once I walked in sunshine,
Where everyday the laughter fills
The meadows, the butterflies fly,
No need to watch the world pass me by.
Then my sanctuary ripped in two,
I can't help it, my "life story" I review.
For some reason, it is not good enough,
I throw myself to the creul world, brave and tough.
Which leaves me here, in this dark tunnel,
My courage drained, like cool-aide through a funnel.
Searching for something I cannot find,
Talking to beings of the dangerous kind.
And through the darkness, comes a light,
Though for some reason, it's unnaturally bright,
I rush towards it, give it a happy shout,
It's only a train, my candle flickers out,
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yellow_sundragon
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2002-12-06 01:00:00]
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Re: Flicker
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 03:42:19 AM AEST
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| This is an amazing write you put your feeling into words with true poetic focus. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Flicker
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by OreO on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 02:03:13 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful....i enjoyed this one alot i love the last line ...my candle flickers out....that's beautiful...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Flicker
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by Necronomy on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:42:52 PM AEST
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hey, that train could be your ticket out of this mess ;) when life throws trains at you, you just gotta make train rides out of it!!
all the best |
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