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End of the world
Contributed by
cutdeeperXalone
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 06:08:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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well im all alone
In a world that I want to hide
keeping my pain inside
Not sure if i can survive
but someday i will learn to breath right
everydat u seem to be living a lie
itry and survive
well now it's the end of the world
now i may breath right
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2005-01-17 18:08:10]
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Re: End of the world
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 06:11:51 PM AEST
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| Great write. I felt your emotion in it. Just hang in there and give it time. |
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Re: End of the world
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by lostlady38 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:02:59 PM AEST
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| this poem is really out there! u r definitely not alone in the way u feel. good work. |
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Re: End of the world
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:16:56 PM AEST
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| youd be very good at making lyrics. |
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Re: End of the world
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:17:26 PM AEST
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I really like your poem
Very good.
Blessing |
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Re: End of the world
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:43:42 AM AEST
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i feel the emotion and pain and all else. a few spelling mistakes but that's alright - you still got the point across
~Bethani~ |
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