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Life
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 05:59:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Just before he died
His sad eyes asking for help
My tears told him no.
Copyright ©
Wesley_Dale_Willis
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2005-01-17 17:59:21]
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 06:00:30 PM AEST
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| Wow...this is so powerful. |
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Re: Life
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by Whitelightning77 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 06:32:37 PM AEST
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very well chosen
words - spelled out a true feeling
of the pain of loss
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Life
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:18:18 PM AEST
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| i wonder if my interpretation of this is actually correct... |
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Re: Life
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by arden on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:16:03 PM AEST
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whoa, this was a really really good haiku.
loved the last part.
awesome.
Arden |
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