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Words of paint
Contributed by
wolfman
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 05:07:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Words of paint
I open the book, my canvas awaits
The right choice of word my mind debates
Words on my pallet the pin is my brush
I use them lighly to make them seem lush
Because a heavy laden phrease
Can put readers in a daze
My muses are vast and they are great
So many that some will have to wait
View this page of fiber and lace
So many images can take its place
My mind moves fervintly my brush strokes are pricise
To give up now would be to pay a terribel price
Ideas are rushing through my collective mind
I must not stop now they dont have much time
Another color my pin will use
As my charactures begin to muse
My wrist it hurts but I push through
So I can create another you
When time is past and my pin is dry
I set down my book and tell my characturs "Hi."
"Now whats left"
He thinks
"A TITLE!"
Copyright ©
wolfman
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2005-01-17 17:07:11]
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Re: Words of paint
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by Clarity_Rising on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:07:34 PM AEST
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| Your title is fitting, I felt like I was seeing a beautiful scene trapped in paint, and trapped in words. You have a talent for placing vivid images in the mind. |
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Re: Words of paint
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:41:44 AM AEST
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This is awesome.
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Re: Words of paint
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 04:42:06 PM AEST
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What's left? A title, always a title. I hate it when I'm about to post a poem, and then see I've got no title.
Well done, Josh.
Take care.
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Re: Words of paint
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:46:27 PM AEST
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And finding that title can hurt sometimes! But yes, this is quite true. I've seen you in such a state of mind. It's something one doesn't see every day.
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