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I'm sory Janic
Contributed by
wolfman
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:14:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I'm sorry Janice
To: Janice
"I am sorry that you had to read this without an explanation
No I was not writing my epitaph or my condemnation
For the fear and pain you may have felt
I apologize and wish those word would just melt
It read so true that it took you back
Made you remember the brother you now lack
I am sorry but these thoughts do haunt my mind
They are a part of me that I cant leave behind
My heart is heavy with these dark desires
I will only be rid of them when my life expires
On the outside it doesnt look so hard
But my soul and heart from this life are bared
I do not think that i will ever do this
I am sorry to cause you pain I did not wish
Take comfort in knowing
If I have trouble to friends I will be going
I am happy to know that you will be there
I am joyful in knowing that you care
Again I am sorry for the hurt my word did ensue
If I need help know that I will take comfort in you."
"Thank you for caring"
wipes his tears
"Joshua L. Dillon"
Copyright ©
wolfman
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2005-01-17 16:14:52]
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Re: I'm sory Janic
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:25:32 PM AEST
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beautifully written letter poem, heartfelt and sincere, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I'm sory Janic
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 04:39:04 PM AEST
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Well deserving of a 5 star vote thing.
Josh, this one was really good. I like where you're taking your poetry. And you thought you couldn't rhyme...
Take care.
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Re: I'm sory Janic
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 04:54:00 PM AEST
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This is good, quite good. A good thing for her to hear, methinks. And your trademark ending style did its part wonderfully here.
Survive, old boy. I need someone good enough to plagiarize.
Andrew |
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