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Through Release
Contributed by
essentially9
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:11:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Through Release
I have the need
To release
What's within me
And just bleed
But I succeed
In not letting need
Get the best of me
Like it gets to you
And controls what you do
Making sure you don't make it through
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essentially9
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2005-01-17 15:11:23]
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Re: Through Release
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by afterdark on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:16:19 PM AEST
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| You have alot to vent I do think..And I think my dear this is only the tip of your ice berg.. |
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Re: Through Release
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by Overstated on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:24:30 PM AEST
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| youve shown how poetry can be an ace outlet! superb writting!!! |
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Re: Through Release
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by wolfman on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 05:20:19 PM AEST
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yes that is true that you can get the best of need and over come it no matter what but for some (like myself) they find it difficult but congratlation on your succes and my you prosper because of it.
this is a fine poem short and to the point very good, and again congatulation on over coming "need" I to hope to over come it. keep writing
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Re: Through Release
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 01:29:58 AM AEST
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| Great write. I can relate, as I keep things bottled up as well. |
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Re: Through Release
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:20:44 PM AEST
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ahhh
I feel you on this one. |
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