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Tank Dogg
Contributed by
gimpie
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:58:03 PM in AEST
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Now that I have your attention
There's something that I'd like to say
I'm sick of just standing here watching
You carelessly throw life away
I know you could do so much better
If only you'd honestly try
Instead of staying doped up
And letting the world pass you by
There was a time we were friends
You watched over me all of the time
But now it seems your one goal......
Is to constantly make me cry
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2005-01-17 13:58:03]
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Re: Tank Dogg
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:41:32 PM AEST
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Sad and full of emotion. Written well.
I'm so sorry u have to watch ur friend throw his life away like that.
I hope he comes to his senses and realizes what he's doing to himself and to u his friend.
Hope things will work out 4 u |
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Re: Tank Dogg
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by Clarity_Rising on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 06:58:44 PM AEST
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| I can feel your pain in this poem for your friend. Drugs are so damaging and detrimental to relationships. I wish the best for your friend. |
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Re: Tank Dogg
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:12:54 AM AEST
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Sad poem
I'm sorry for your friend.
He has made his choice and will either hit bottom or die from his choice.Drugs are evidently his friend now and even that will turn on him. It is right fr you to exit,but alwas keep him in your prayer.
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