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The Struggle
Contributed by
staryeyed
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Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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my life right now i cant understand.
i wonder through these days and go through the motions.
i get up and play the role.
i get up to pay my tole.
for my choices i pay a price thats not cheap.
i have no control and for these reasons i weep.
i weep for the things i may never accomplish, the yearning in my soul to be the perfect person.
the doubts in my head which are beginning to worsen.
the doubts in my head which scream louder than me, constantly screaming, struggling free.
i subdue them for a moment but they soon return.
leaving me here, completely empty and burned.
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staryeyed
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2002-12-05 22:00:00]
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Re: The Struggle
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by MyInspiration on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 11:52:00 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I like it. Your style reminds me of my own. Great flow and experssion. We all feel this way sometime. Good write. |
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Re: The Struggle
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by frozensuicide on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 01:03:56 AM AEST
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this one is good too. i like the way you rhumes and expressed your words with feeling. nice work!
thanks for sharing it!
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Re: The Struggle
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by Sarah22 on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 12:39:26 AM AEST
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keep writing
in the future
your poems are
so neat to read . |
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