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Choke
Contributed by
MoldedClay
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:01:39 AM in AEST
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Swirls of confusion and dispair
Breathing in the thick air
Trying to think through all this polution
Seems as if there's no solution
Spinning round and round she falls
With blues and yellows the lonelyness calls
Folds of fear surround her frail soul
Tightening the chains that won't let go
Reaching out she tries to shout
But she finds no words come out
She gasps for air but cannot breath
Drowning in this lonely disease
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2005-01-17 08:01:39]
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Re: Choke
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:41:47 PM AEST
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| Good write. Great flow. |
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Re: Choke
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 07:17:57 PM AEST
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wow
like Marisa said, great flow |
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