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Grey
Contributed by
MoldedClay
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:54:16 AM in AEST
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Yawn and drift asleep
Smudged with all the colors deep
Blured and smeared across the wall
Slowly you begin to fall
Stretch and scream but nothing's heard
Lost without a single word
It's all absorbed into the grey
No longer any light of day
Twist and swirl round and round
Slowly till you hit the ground
Darkness falls and you're alone
No one could have ever known
Lost and cannot find the way
All blended inside the grey
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MoldedClay
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2005-01-17 07:54:16]
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Re: Grey
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by LadyBo on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:35:39 AM AEST
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| Nice write. I could feel the greyness. And I liked they rhythm and cadence, too; not everyone can do that! |
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Re: Grey
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:41:02 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Wonderfully flowing. You should be proud of this first write! Much peace. |
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Re: Grey
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:40:58 PM AEST
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| Great write! The flow is awesome. Great first poem! |
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Re: Grey
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by Stitch on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:37:50 PM AEST
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I like this a lot. I look forward to more of your writes.
Stitch |
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