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The Hardest Thing Ever
Contributed by
CurtisC
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:05:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How do you erase something that's held so deep within?
Can love be this hard to forget?
It's always lingering right below your skin,
following you like a silhouette.
Love is hard to come by,
but harder to wash away.
lots of asking why,
and feelings of dismay.
How could anyone make it through this?
I think I'd rather drown.
To go from a feeling of bliss,
to your whole world crashing down.
This is the hardest thing I've ever done,
the most I've had to mend.
This nightmare has just begun,
when will it ever end?
Copyright ©
CurtisC
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2005-01-17 03:05:45]
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Re: The Hardest Thing Ever
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:42:31 AM AEST
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This is beautiful.
"Love is hard to come by,
but harder to wash away."
So true. |
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Re: The Hardest Thing Ever
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by loopylou on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:53:45 AM AEST
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| I love this poem. Its wonderful...its displays all the feelings somone feels when they've had there heart broken but in a sad way its still beautiful |
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Re: The Hardest Thing Ever
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by prozac_memory on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:16:57 AM AEST
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another beautiful poem
[x]. |
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Re: The Hardest Thing Ever
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by Kano on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:54:23 AM AEST
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| Great poem it is hard to begin again after losing something so close I know just how you feel |
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Re: The Hardest Thing Ever
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:37:16 PM AEST
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a nice poem with alot of emotion and thought. When you think it wont end it does and your feeling alot better about things
Michelle |
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Re: The Hardest Thing Ever
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:25:03 PM AEST
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| Your work is so amazing. I enjoyed reading this one cause its got so much potential to touch people. Crash and Burn by Savage Garden comes to mind when I read this, but unlike that song, theres a lot less hope here, and it just adds to the piece. |
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Re: The Hardest Thing Ever
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:04:03 PM AEST
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"To go from a feeling of bliss,
to your whole world crashing down."
Loved that line. Great write! xoxo TD |
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