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HUSH NOW
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:11:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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dont make a sound
dont dare to drop a tear
they may hear you
rejection is what you fear
they can never hear
that deafening loud sound
of your heart dying.....
even when their around
be quiet now
dont distrupt their lives
as you start fading
right before their eyes
stay in silence
you know they cant hear your pain
all alone
your strength begins to wane
dont make a noise
their deaf to your wailing
so unaware
that your will to survive is failing
HUSH NOW
no one knows your plight
or hears you call for help
your darkness out of sight
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-01-17 02:11:24]
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Re: HUSH NOW
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:14:10 AM AEST
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| I like this. The flow is good. Great piece. |
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Re: HUSH NOW
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:23:01 AM AEST
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| Good poem. It's kinda sad, knowing people ignore you that much... |
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Re: HUSH NOW
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by persia on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:44:53 AM AEST
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Dis iz a kik-ass poem. It haz gr8 rhythm!
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