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Death on A Platter
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:05:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Im hungry
for something tragic
and dark
Im thirsting
for something liberating
and hopeful
Im craving
for something peaceful
and free
Im longing
for something final
an escape
Im so starving
for something exquiste
and tasteful
In this bland and
loveless world
is it the sweet taste of Death
i desire for?
oh yes..........grant me just one taste
hand me Death on a platter
and i would happily partake
of its rich and satisfying fruits
what a fine banquet it would make
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
... [
2005-01-17 02:05:13]
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Re: Death on A Platter
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:07:33 AM AEST
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| Great write! I enjoyed it! I like how it all came together to make an awesome piece. Good job. |
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Re: Death on A Platter
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by CurtisC on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:08:11 AM AEST
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whoa..thats pretty dark, but i liked it. good job :)
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Re: Death on A Platter
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:16:14 AM AEST
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| woa dark is right.i like this piece alot. |
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Re: Death on A Platter
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by flamingblade on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 02:50:01 PM AEST
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hhmmm, nice metaphor
or maybe I interpreted it wrong
oh well,
good job
Bye |
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Re: Death on A Platter
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by flamingblade on
Sunday, 9th September 2007 @ 09:43:07 AM AEST
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I love it!
so dark and demented, just how i like them
Keep 'em comin'!!
Flamingblade |
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