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Just Like This
Contributed by
calista
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:20:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Just Like This
January 16, 2005
With the sun in your eyes and your smile growing wide
I want to remember you just like this
When you tie your shoes in a rush to catch the bus
I want to remember you just like this
While the sun goes down and you study the pinks and oranges with a frown
I want to remember you just like this
With your eyes fixed on the page and your mind so engaged
I want to remember you just like this
As the plane lifts into the air and you claim you're not scared
I want to remember you just like this
When you look at me from the bathroom with a toothbrush in your mouth
I want to remember you just like this
Every simple moment so complex in memory
I have to remember you to understand me
Copyright ©
calista
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2005-01-17 01:20:08]
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Re: Just Like This
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:09:41 AM AEST
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| Wow...this is wonderful. It's so sweet in a great way. The flow is nice too. Good job. |
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Re: Just Like This
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by justjonesy on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:52:12 AM AEST
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| this is a truly great and very unique poem...I'll be coming back to read this one a few times...awesome awesome job...it made me picture this lost relationship...sad but done in a very different and great way |
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Re: Just Like This
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by loopylou on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:59:46 AM AEST
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| You made your memories beautiful...i dont know if this is about the loss of a relation ship or the death f a partner or somone close...but i love the way you looked at it from a postive point of view. |
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