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What I Think of When I See You
Contributed by
jmpy84
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:09:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your hair is as dark as a night sky
Your eyes are as shiny as a blue sea
Your skin is as soft as silk
Your touch is as warm as a summer breeze
Your lips are as red as a rose
Your kiss is as sweat as honey
I want to remember you just like this
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jmpy84
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2005-01-16 23:09:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: What I Think of When I See You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:10:41 PM AEST (User
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Sweet write. :-) |
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Re: What I Think of When I See You
(User Rating: 1 ) by ButchCorpuz on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:30:48 PM AEST (User
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Very sweet poem, keep it up!
-Butch |
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Re: What I Think of When I See You
(User Rating: 1 ) by mina-1 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:37:33 AM AEST (User
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always a delight to read ur work.
Short , yet so expressive. great write.
keep it up |
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