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Falling for you
Contributed by
nic0le
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:43:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Just because I adore our conversation,
Just because you instigate smiles,
Simply becasue I learn you,
Twice,
Simply because I adore
f
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l
l
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g
Asleep with you,
I am
f
a
l
l
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g
For you.
Just because you're crazy
Just because I'm crazy
For you,
Because you're beautiful...
I kinda like you a whole lot.
Copyright ©
nic0le
... [
2005-01-16 22:43:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Falling for you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:52:17 PM AEST (User
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Great write! I like the structure. So good! |
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Re: Falling for you
(User Rating: 1 ) by ButchCorpuz on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:54:15 PM AEST (User
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A good poem mixed with an innovative structure. Very nice!
-Butch |
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Re: Falling for you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:48:34 AM AEST (User
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i thought it was very sweet. |
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Re: Falling for you
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:29:15 AM AEST (User
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Very good write-n-awesomely creative.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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