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society's child
Contributed by
Keila
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:05:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
political
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My eyes are blind,
so i may not see whats wrong
I am deaf,
I cannot hear the lies
My toung cut out,
so that i may not speak my mind
i follow blindly,
like a sheep dumbly to the slaughter
i am mindless
like all of the others
i am soulless,
for having one would be a sin
i am society's child
Copyright ©
Keila
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2005-01-16 20:05:30]
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Re: society's child
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:07:01 PM AEST
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| Good write. |
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Re: society's child
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:12:21 PM AEST
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wise beyound your years, so much insight,u may be societies child, but your your own person, well done and glad 2 see u writting again . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: society's child
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by Rottenrioter on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:21:13 PM AEST
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| nice write...this will probaly go in my top ten favorites on here |
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Re: society's child
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:30:14 PM AEST
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| excellent, simply excellent. you might be societys child but you can be the parent of something else, something better. |
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Re: society's child
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by Rhymingron on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:29:57 AM AEST
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| You make a good point. I like this a lot. |
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Re: society's child
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by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:48:17 PM AEST
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| babe, my favorite so far. I feel challenged- I think you might just write better poems than me. |
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