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Would you let go?
Contributed by
Froggy
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:48:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Would you, let it be gone
With the, silent wind blow?
I know that I have it,
And vow to never let go.
I see you, i breath you,
Wherever I go,
You place in my Heart,
To everyone i show.
I promise to love you,
From this ocean, til this land
If only you'll,
Be my helping hand.
Copyright ©
Froggy
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2005-01-16 19:48:28]
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Re: Would you let go?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:52:29 PM AEST
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Awesome write.
Glad you won't let go. I wouldn't either. :-) |
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Re: Would you let go?
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:13:47 PM AEST
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| very nice. need and want have a thin line between them. but if what i needed, such as a person, would be better off without me, than i would let go. |
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Re: Would you let go?
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:43:47 AM AEST
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| I suffer becouse of something so close and so true to that that, I had to let her go. |
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Re: Would you let go?
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by Trisha on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:01:05 PM AEST
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| This Is Very Good. No I Don't Think I'll Let It Go |
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