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Desert
Contributed by
merry
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:57:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sin crept in the open mouth
Leaving no room for breath
Traffic moved slowly
Against the sunset
Rusty wounded soldiers
Thirsty for knowledge
Misunderstood contempt
As if it were a compliment
Guns aimed at enemies
So like one another
It was hard to tell them apart
Passing monuments of shame
Bowed heads with prayers on parched lips
Spoiled by war
Mirror of intolerance shatters
Sending shards of blame
Into the eyes of every man
Blind to fault
We point at them
Copyright ©
merry
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2005-01-16 18:57:48]
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Re: Desert
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:04:39 PM AEST
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| This write is excellent. Very vivid images here. I liked it. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Desert
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:32:28 PM AEST
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| i think this write ive understood the most out of all of yours. makes me wish i could understand all your others as well. |
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Re: Desert
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:04:52 AM AEST
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| Awesome truly awesome...... I love it! Magnificant poem!!! |
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