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Birds
Contributed by
Barrabhoy
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:24:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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An Albatross, lonely, far from home
A Chicken, nervously scratching, in the dirt
A Pigeon, finally, finds his way home
A Songbird, mortally hurt
A Cuckoo, stealthily, steals a nest
The Songbird, loses what he loved best
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2005-01-16 18:24:56]
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Re: Birds
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:55:02 PM AEST
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Sad write.
I wish you the best. |
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Re: Birds
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:29:35 PM AEST
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Tangible grief...
Blessings to you... |
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Re: Birds
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by Essentially9 on
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| maybe the songbird will sing again... |
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Re: Birds
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by Baronhawk on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:28:23 AM AEST
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| A rather simple write, but within it is a reflective pool of a silent hurt that I understand all too well. A rather good effort that. |
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