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I Cant Stand This Feeling Anymore!

Contributed by BabyFacedAngel2010 on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 05:50:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



It hurts not to.
You see that razor keeps staring me in my face!
I want to grab it so bad.
Think I think about how many peole beg me day after day to not

Well I ignore it for now.
Then real soon I feel as sh_ity as before and Im dieing to cut!
I see that razor again.
This time I reach for it...
But then I hear my mom so I had it 'til later.

Later never comes that day.
So then after I feel it again I see it...
I reach and take it in my hand and as I do Im crying from the pain I feel
I say to myself"Its time to put yourself outta this da_mn misory"

I grab for something bigger and sharper and I lay in my bed and write this poem.
Then when I finsh my last line I cut...
Not my arm though,My neck.
Its a real deep cut too.

When my mom wakes she'll see a knife in my hand and the poem I wrote.
I pray that sh understands there was nothing she could do.
No one could cause it was everyone who drove me to do this.

So now im lieing in a pool of blood and only I know why.
Sorry world for being here,Sorry for me ever being on your ground.
Goodbye friends,Mom and anyone who helped me see it was my time and
I also thank you so much!




Copyright © BabyFacedAngel2010 ... [ 2005-01-16 17:50:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: I Cant Stand This Feeling Anymore! (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:35:42 PM AEST
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Very powerful poem, I hope this isnt true!


Re: I Cant Stand This Feeling Anymore! (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:50:09 PM AEST
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needs work with spelling. pain goes away without the help of death.


Re: I Cant Stand This Feeling Anymore! (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:38:51 PM AEST
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very good poem , yes i also hope it aint true there are other ways around things ..plese comistder them
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