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Broken
Contributed by
mrmop
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 03:37:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I remember when I saw you for the first time, you glowed and lit up my life.
I handed you my heart and soul to keep safe
You taught me real love and filled my life with joy
The first time we touched, I knew that I could not live without you
You were my world, my heaven, my everything
Now I feel so lonely and lost, I no longer have my heart and soul
You took them and crushed them in your hands
You felt nothing whilst they wept and died
You showed no care and no remorse
Now all that I am is dust in the wind
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mrmop
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2005-01-16 15:37:30]
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Re: Broken
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:20:34 PM AEST
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Well written. It doesn't need to rhyme to be good.
Your feelings were well conveyed.
Jenni |
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Re: Broken
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:03:52 PM AEST
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| i agree with jenni. better to have had it than to never have had it at all as they say. |
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