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Imagination's Goodbye
Contributed by
Jezabel
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Sun sets
fog rolls in
from shore.
I waved
Goodbye
to her
as
she stood
In a doorway
in the alley
streetlight lit
looking trapped.
I know
she suffers
Lack of Imagination.
Me.
I go on
without
picking up
where others
left off
in the gas
of stoves.
Copyright ©
Jezabel
... [
2005-01-16 14:30:00]
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Re: Imagination's Goodbye
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 03:03:01 PM AEST
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| I notice a bit of Sylvia Plath here at the last stanza..Which is a bit odd but very well done for your ending..Good write. |
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Re: Imagination's Goodbye
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:23:13 AM AEST
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| i guess im the only one alive that doesnt read plath. very nice. |
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