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6 Feet Under
Contributed by
thepos
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:59:13 PM in AEST
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6 Feet Under
The Shadow of death,
Didn't come for me.
So now I must wait,
6 feet under this tree.
I don't have a life,
But not filled with death.
My body is empty,
So here I shall rest.
Souless like my heart,
In shame of my sorrow.
I was to evil,
For hell to borrow.
Restless I lay here,
Never to tell.
If I'll end up,
In heaven or hell.
†Evan L.†
http://www.thepoemsofsorrow.com
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thepos
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2005-01-16 12:59:13]
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Re: 6 Feet Under
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 01:26:39 PM AEST
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very said...especially if neither hell nor heaven can decide if they want you...cause all the evil in this life took you in way to deep....good poem
please comment on my work too
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Re: 6 Feet Under
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:09:53 PM AEST
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| Not to bad at all.. |
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Re: 6 Feet Under
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by biggredd on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:08:40 PM AEST
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ok i like you, you rock! lol. your poem is really good, it flows really well and it sounds like something you would read in a book somewhere. Good job, keep up the good work!
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