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Amazement Due to Snow
Contributed by
sean88
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:32:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Brisk, chilled wind
Just enough to freeze,
It’s a rough variation
On a winter breeze,
Dark, black clouds
Shadow overhead,
But lucky enough
I’m still in bed,
The day drags on
Whilst the weather clears,
Leaving behind
Rain drop smears,
I loosen myself
Take a glance outside,
I feel so amazed
I stare wide eyed,
As no rain had fallen
It was crisp, white snow,
My eyes are in love
With its radiant glow,
So rich is this view
It makes my heart beat fast,
Just a shame the sun will arrive
And this feeling won’t last
Copyright ©
sean88
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2005-01-16 11:32:04]
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Re: Amazement Due to Snow
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by julieh on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:42:15 AM AEST
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| I know what you mean i love the snow! how it hangs to the branches on trees.ireally enjoyed this take care ju |
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Re: Amazement Due to Snow
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by Tinkerbell13 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:53:46 AM AEST
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I LIKED THE WAY U EXPRESSED THE WAY U FEEL ABOUT THE SNOW I L;OVE THE SNOW EVEN THOUGH WE GET VERY LITTLE OF IT HERE IN TEXAS NICE JOB!
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Re: Amazement Due to Snow
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:19:34 PM AEST
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such a beautiful peice of writting, glissening in it's sparkle with reverence for nature, nice rhythum 2 it also, u write well . . .
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