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Take Me Away
Contributed by
TheRavenousOne
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:04:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Is there something I dont get?
Is there something I dont understand?
Grab me by the wings,
Or lead me by the hand.
Show me what I'm thinking,
Take me away from this land.
Show me why I'm like this,
and why I cant close this off.
I try and I try,
And I'm always right,
Never wrong.
Take me by the wings,
and fly me free,
Without those visions and dreams.
Take me by the hand,
and lead me far away,
Ne'er to come back.
Show me why we cry,
Why we shed these tears.
Take me by the wrist,
and hold on tight.
Lead me thru these lonely nights.
Take me down those dark paths,
and please dont let go.
Lead me to where I need to go,
That certain place,
The one that you know.
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Re: Take Me Away
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by thepos on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:15:13 PM AEST
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get to your point. What is all that about and why do you want that to happen? Try to explain that in your poetry. It would be better if people knew what you are talking about.Nice though.
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Re: Take Me Away
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:31:21 PM AEST
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you wanna be set free from this place too don't you? you have those dream that come true...know when theings wil happen...good poem...
please comment on my work too
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