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Backwards
Contributed by
xXluckie_lynnXx
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:46:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Backwards
I take a step forward
Or so it seems
Time goes and I’m not gaining
I’m stuck inside a dream
Close my eyes
I see blackness
The empty part of knowing
Is haunting endless
Life pauses
For me to breathe
Then fast forwards
No longer waiting for me
I can’t grasp anything
All there is are broken dreams
Slipping away bit by bit
What will become of me ?
I’m not moving anywhere near
The new beginning
Tickets were bought
And the movie is not ending
Swirling in a mess of yesterday
Will tomorrow ever come ?
I’m numb and waiting
But my heart is dumb
I ravel alone
I need a companion
To walk a backwards street
To see the mountain, but be stuck in the canyon
Too much of me is exposed
The darkness is washing me away
All the happiness, smiles, and laughter
Are fading, day by day
I need to move
But there’s nothing to gain
My mind is playing tricks
Skin is in pain
Life pauses
For me to breathe
No air flowing out
Shadows become me .
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Re: Backwards
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:50:50 AM AEST
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Sorry its supposed to e
I travel alone ..
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Re: Backwards
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 01:12:19 PM AEST
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I really understand exactly how you feel.
Great poem |
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Re: Backwards
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by XOashleyreneXO on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 05:25:05 PM AEST
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god i love all of your writes. this one is deep...very deep...just like most of your other ones. keep them commin beth lynn!
Love ya! ashley rene |
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